I think the biggest thing this class has helped me was to identifying my mistakes , identifying was the first step , correcting them comes next. One of my biggest flaw was that I used to shift from first person to second person to third with a blink of an eye. Another major thing I learned is that every essay needs a thesis statement and a few sentences to support it, I never really knew of it until Miss Sarah told me to do. I realized that my use of vocabulary needs to be improved drastically. I tend to use commas and try to combine more three sentences into one making me look like a complete idiot.

I have started to make conscious efforts to address some of the problems mentioned above. Miss Sarah is conducting a few conferences in which there will be a one to one conversation with her on my mistakes. I think this will be very helpful. On a side-note , I am nervous on how I will fair in my WSPT.