My essays needed a lot of changes after this peer review. The sad thing is that I don’t have an editing checklist , I’m pretty sure I missed that class and I haven’t done anything about it. Even though I tried making my essay better . I don’t think it worked out that well but in other news , I have seen an actual change in my essays , I used to get a lot of comments on how bad my choice of words were but that changed. I really liked the exercise where we had to form our own thesis statements.

The next thing on my agenda is to review the essay and submit it for the final draft. This is on my priority list. I realised that i haven’t reached 500 words yet and I’m going to do this tomorrow.